davjlee
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posted on 11/20/2009 at 09:21 PM
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OK, I darkened some shadow areas and added some additional color to the centers of the flowers. C&C always welcome and appreciated. Thanks.
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Thorax 48
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posted on 11/20/2009 at 09:53 PM
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Looks nice! I like the artistic style of it. A couple of things that stand out as out of place--The white border doesn't feel like a good fit and
something about the transparent parts of the wings looks odd.
Aside from the quibbles, I think this one is well put together.
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davjlee
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posted on 11/21/2009 at 02:18 AM
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Thanks Thorax. The transparent portion was kind of an afterthought. Originally, she didn't have anything in that part. Might still be the better
choice? I was actually thinking the same thing about the white border, except I wasn't "feeling" the shadow within it. I think that I will try
both; one without the white border, and one without the shadow.
I have also done some more editing on her facial features; curved her nose etc... I'll try your suggestions and re-post with my other changes as
well.
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